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21 November, 2011

Book reviews: Big Al’s Books and Pals

Filed under: books — monado @ 14:11
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Not only does the blog name rhyme, but the reviews are clear, careful and thorough. If you are interested in e-books, take a look at  Big Al’s Books and Pals for recommendations.

10 November, 2011

Indefinite pronouns

Filed under: language — monado @ 18:06
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Dinosaur comics takes on the problem of gender-neutral singular pronouns in English. See if you like their solution.

6 September, 2011

Consistency is key

Filed under: accuracy,editing — monado @ 12:50
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As an editor, you don’t always need to be an expert to know that something is wrong.

The owl family

If a piece contains internal contradictions, query it.

Strigi- or Stringi- ?

Often you can just check public references to find the correct form.

The "Strigis" have it

“”Strix” was the Latin word for owl. Ironically, it comes from the Greek word “strinx,” or screecher.

11 August, 2011

Who’s shooting whom?

Filed under: accuracy,communication,editing,writing — monado @ 10:47
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It’s important in technical documentation to be clear about who does what. It’s also important in news reporting. One of my pet peeves is this kind of headline from the Montreal Gazette:

Headline from Montreal Gazette, 'Bystander among two dead in Montreal police shooting.'

The headline is ambiguous; but this is the first article about the crime, so you can read the first paragraph to find out that the police were the ones who fired carelessly into a public street and killed someone who was merely walking to work.

News article with marked phrases 'Montreal police shooting' and 'Two men were shot by an officer'

In later articles, the phrase “police shooting” will appear again and it will be harder to find out if the crime is shooting of police or by police. This kind of writing should be outlawed!

10 August, 2011

Lightning strike in Ireland throws Amazon servers offline

Filed under: computers,technology — monado @ 11:16
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Our electrical and electronic systems are complex and delicate. Complexity can confer massive redundancy and resistance to failure; contrariwise, it can confer single points of failure and fault propagation. In this case, a single bolt of lightning, to a power utility transformer, disrupted power to the Irish servers of Amazon’s Elastic Computing Cloud (EC2). The power surge affected the electricity phase control system that must be running before alternative generators are brought online. With the generators de-synchronized, power remained out. This shows that the parts of Amazon’s data centre are not isolated enough to stand a high-voltage surge.

In the end, it didn’t matter that the servers ran multiple virtual machines. All instances of EC2 were knocked offline for three hours, with gradual recovery after that, extending up to two days more. I hope not too many businesses are depending on it!

8 July, 2011

Ben Goldacre: The perils of writing in an unfamiliar language

Filed under: language — monado @ 03:40
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Ben Goldacre has an example, “The perils of writing in an unfamiliar language.” It’s a science paper with an unfortunate acronym. However, one commenter suggests that the acronym was already being used elsewhere.

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